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引用第8楼alecaud于2006-07-06 08:18发表的“”:
This topic should be mendy, share and learning is primary!!!

不知道要表达什么意思，mendy这是英文单词吗？我真的没有印象。share作“分享”时是动词，用sharing代替就行了。

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引用第4楼rainbowgirl于2006-06-30 16:33发表的“”:
i  like this idea ,my english is not very well ,so everyone in here is my teacher ,i hope if i have error in my sentence,please tell me .i will very thanks for him or her  so that my english will have a great improve.

批改：这是具有初级英语能力的新手表达出来的英语，请恕我直言。表达断续混乱是明显的标志。
错误：
1、第一句的in是多余的。
2、i hope if i have error in my sentence,please tell me. 这句你们想想应该怎么表达呢？如何表达“希望我的句子里面有错误的话，请告诉我。” 我是这么说的"I hope you can point out my mistakes in the sentences, if any." 或者用偏向中国人表达习惯的"If I make any mistakes in the sentence, please tell me."或者"I hope you can tell me the mistakes I have made in the sentences."
3、最后这句是表达最乱的。其实，就是这么说就好了" I will thank you very much for helping me improve my English greatly."  原句开始就缺了谓语，so that 使用得很勉强而且用错了，毕竟so that 是表示因果的，总不能说因为我谢谢你们，所以我的英文提高了吧？用because就对了。improve是动词，真的要在这地方使用就应该用名词"improvement"。

这是一个学语言的人必经的阶段，希望rainbowgirl不要介意我的批改，继续努力，水平会越提越高的。

after looking  these ,i  hope you  can  teach me  ,how  to speak  or how  to write ?

now,i can't  talk aloundly  .  i admire  you  very  much

could you point out  my  sentence  above ?

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引用第13楼sq1979于2006-08-10 11:24发表的“”:
now,i can't  talk aloundly  .  i admire  you  very  much

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aloundly是什么意思呢？如果是“大声地、响亮地”，那么应该是loudly 或者aloud.这里应该用aloud.

oh, It's really a good place . I hope there are a lot of  friends to join here . We can speak a lot of things about us , and never be nervous about our mistakes , because there are so many teachers here. I decide to write down something every day in English, and read them loudly. I believe i will get a rapid progress in English. As the says :where there is a will, there is a way.
Thank every one . [s:1]

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引用第16楼susanli于2006-08-19 16:42发表的“”:
oh, It's really a good place . I hope there are a lot of  friends to join here . We can speak a lot of things about us , and never be nervous about our mistakes , because there are so many teachers here. I decide to write down something every day in English, and read them loudly. I believe i will get a rapid progress in English. As the says :where there is a will, there is a way.
Thank every one . [s:1]

That's nice. In the phrase "As the says" I recommend you to replace the "says" with "saying". And the last sentence should be "everyone" instead of "every one".

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引用第7楼阳光心情于2006-08-01 21:13发表的“”:
Pursue

Long time not to write down my own feeling in English.
Recently it seems complicated. I always ask myself what I am pursuing, a decent job or a decent lover?
Yeah, I find I am a little vain, and am very curious about why I have changed.
.......

No  matter  what  the  result  is, we  wouldn't  give  up  what   we   pursue.

In  order  to  realize  our  ambitions,  we  must  pursue  constantly.