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引用第4楼谢谢于2005-11-13 22:11发表的“”:
Thank you very much, 醉清风！

Your encouragement and your support will bring me a lot of confidences.

Hope you are happy everyday!  [s:4]

confidence is the uncountable noun. so the "s" at the end should be cancelled. The second sentence should be  "Wish you happy everday!"

For the 45th floor, alex might ignore the spelling mistake of "grammer" which might be "grammmar".

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引用第20楼楚羽于2005-12-28 15:01发表的“”:
I want ,I speak english to everbody in here, and please teacher xiehuaMM or other teacher tell me about my mistakes.

不晓得对不对 [s:5] 应该是有错误的，我想

批改：

错误：I want ,I speak english to everbody in here,
正确：I want to speak english to everybody here,

错误：and please teacher xiehuaMM or other teacher tell me about my mistakes.
正确：and teacher XiehuaMM or other teachers, would you please tell me the mistakes I have made?

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引用第27楼谢谢于2005-12-29 12:36发表的“”:
I hope I make progress every day under everybody's help.

这句话也是我想说的。

It should be "with" instead of "under".

Thank you very much, hzmmuk!


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引用第40楼悠悠凡心于2006-04-26 22:38发表的“”:
In junior middle school, senior middle school,in university, I am learning English hard all the time, but now It is still a difficulty  to express my thought  using English. I really don't know what to do.

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错误：In junior middle school, senior middle school,in university, I am learning English hard all the time,
症状：表达累赘，时态错误（应该使用过去时而不是现在进行时）
修改：During the junior middle school,sinior middle school and the University, I learnt English very hard.

不算错误的错误：but now It is still a difficulty  to express my thought  using English.
症状：转折词用得不太好，表达拗口。
修改: However, I still fell it difficult to express myself in English.

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引用第43楼xa214于2006-05-27 22:48发表的“”:
my advice :introduce oneself

用self introduction来代替introduce oneself更好

To xiehua: My pleasure.

Talking about self-introduction, let me be the first one to start this topic. I was born in 1972, graduated with a bachelor reward in 1994 after having studied English as my major for 4 years. Then I got a chance to work in China Construction Bank. However, at first I became an accountant and a treasurer afterwards. This period costs me 7 years. In June 2002, having sacked the bank for 6 months, I passed the IELTS exam with a transcript of average 6.5 with which I was qualified to go overseas studying E-business. Due to the problem in finding placement, I spent 3 years to get the Master reward. Just at the beginning of this year, I came back from The United Kingdom starting for my job hunting. Unfortunately my job is stll in the air. That's all for my self-introduction.

原来这里真的是藏龙卧虎啊~~~

hzmmuk, cheer up! I admire you greatly. That is from my heart, not flattery.
I believe your current condition is only temporary.
Waiting for your good news~~~ [s:4]

hzmmuk，your english is so good that i don't know how to express my admiration for you！ha！i wish i can make great progress with your and xiehuaMM lead！
one more question ：
a sentence you refer to ：“修改：During the junior middle school,sinior middle school and the University, I learnt English very hard.”
in this sentence 我想用过去完成进行时“i have been studying english very hard ”instead of “i learnt english very hard”，不知觉得可行吗？
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