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引用第89楼shirley622于2006-11-29 12:58发表的:
Good idea!Our English corner!I hope i could improve myself,please help me ,everyone!if someone could introduct some books about accounting which wrote in english!(i don't know what i wrote is all right,give me some suggestion, thanks!)
Okay Shirley, I'm here to give you some advice. First grammar mistakes occur here and there in your short passage. The tense must be in accordance with each other. You see, if you use present tense "hope" so you must use "can" instead of "could". The same comes with "wrote" which should be "write" if you use "know" in the main clause. Small mistakes such as "introduct" which should be "introduce" and the books can not "wrote in English" but they can "be written" in English. you should say "whether my writing is all right" instead of the original. If you use "some", the "suggestion" should be in plural form, that is, "suggestions".
Hope the advice above can be helpful for ya.
